After we completed the first draft of the trailer we showed it to the rest of the class and gave us feedback on the good things as well as the things that could be improved.
Good:
- The 'Stairs' shot
- The 'Headlight' shot
- The 'Hand' shot
- Narrative and shots get quicker
- Dark, night time setting
- Establishing shot
- Appropriate sound
- Acting (of particularly Stephanie)
Bad:
- Not very fast
- Poor sound (Out of time piano music)
- Low variety of shots
- Unclear plot
- Small inappropriate sped-up parts
- Louis saying "Action" before the last shot
- The 'Crawling' shot was inappropriate and confusing, interpretive dance!
- The 'Sink' shot
- Poor title graphics
- No production company logo
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